Thursday, October 17, 2013

Patrick Freivald Interview

The Horror Librarian: How do you approach a new writing project? Are you a planner or a panster?

Patrick Freivald: I'm about as far from a pantser as you can get. I start with an idea--which includes not only the general characters, but also the ending--and then I outline. My outline expands from rough ideas to chapters to individual scenes, and for a 75,000 word book, my outline is often around 5,000-10,000 words.

The outlining process takes me a month or three, and that's the meat of the creative process. Once it's done, I get the words on (virtual) paper over eight or ten weeks.

The Horror Librarian: Your recent YA horror duo, Twice Shy and Special Dead have been well received by fans and the greater YA community. Can you talk a little about how you developed your characters? How did you get into teenaged Ani's head?

Patrick Freivald: I'm a high school teacher. Ani started off as an observation that's true about some adults as well, but especially true of teenagers: they tend to trivialize the important, and obsess over the trivial. I wanted to make Ani three-dimensional, a real girl with hopes and dreams and perceptions about the people around her that may or may not be entirely correct, but above all I wanted her to have this tragic flaw, this underlying immaturity when it comes to what's truly important.

I also wanted her to have a solid, excellent relationship with her sociopathic mother. YA fiction is so full of parent/child conflict of a very stereotypical sort, and I wanted to instead show a strong, loving relationship that can survive even breaches of trust and life-threatening situations.

From there, I could have written a dreadfully serious book about a girl with a very serious secret.... Ani could have been a bulimic kleptomaniac lesbian with AIDS, and her social life would hinge on keeping others from discovering that. I thought it would be funny if instead I made it her life at stake instead of her social life, and made her secret something utterly unrealistic. The premise of a closeted zombie is absurd in the classic sense of the word, and I wanted to skirt the line where an astute reader might have a hard time deciding whether or not I meant to be ironic at any given point.

Devon, Mike, and Ani came entirely out of my head. The rest of the characters are shamelessly modeled on people I know, with names changed to protect the guilty (with Mrs. Weller and Mr. Cummings being the prime exceptions.) I cheated; it's easy to write genuine reactions to situations when you know the people you're writing.

The Horror Librarian: What is your dream project?

Patrick Freivald: I don't have one. I write because it's fun--same reason I keep bees and grow hot peppers and run a robotics team. I'd love to experience that Rowling-style life-altering success with my writing, so that's a dream I have about my projects, but it's not a "dream project." I just go where my ADD takes me, and enjoy the ride.

The Horror Librarian:  What are you working on right now? As an aside, can you tell us a little about what it means to "Boil it down," per your blog?

Patrick Freivald:  I'm polishing up my next near-future thriller for JournalStone. Jade Sky is about humans that have been augmented with superhuman strength, speed, regenerative abilities, and so forth, but at the price of possible madness from the murderous whispers that claw through their minds.

I'm also gearing up for the November 15th release of Blood List, which I wrote with my twin brother Phil. It's about a serial killer who's trying to save his father's life, and the FBI team hunting him. You can pick it up on preorder on Amazon now, but they don't yet have the cover or description up, so you'll have to take my word that it's awesome.

In a fit of irony, I'm going to ramble a bit about my blog, Word Soup. It's for writers, about efficient writing. I started it because, after doing some editing as favors, I keep getting requests from up-and-coming authors who want to pay me to edit their work--not rules and typos and stuff like that, but real, down-and-dirty edits. The problem is that I'm extremely busy, and my time is worth more to me than what they'd be willing to pay. (And besides, I don't want to rip people off even if they'd be willing to pay me that much.) So I started this blog to help people learn how to hone their craft.

The idea is that even when you know all your grammar and punctuation rules, and your setting and plot and pacing and characterization, and all those things that you need to know in order to write well, that doesn't necessarily mean that you know how to write well. It's possible to take a great idea, use proper English, and still tell a story badly. The most egregious thing I see is inefficiency in word choice.

If you say something in ten words that can be said in three, then your prose is something that a reader has to slog through in order to get what you really want--the information. So in my blog, authors give me a 500-word sample of their work, and I boil out all the unnecessary words, and explain the hows and whys of it as I go along. The goal is to convey the same information, with the same tone, evoking the same imagery and emotions, but with as few words as possible. And when you do that, you find that you've become a better writer, and your work is a better read.

(And for the record, I'm better at it now than I was a year ago, and was better a year ago than two years ago. I expect to be better at it in the future than I am now. And also for the record, I made no attempt to boil down my responses here. I tend to ramble when writing informally, and break a lot of my own rules in the process.)

The Horror Librarian:  List 5 things that are currently on your writing desk.

Patrick Freivald: My writing desk is the dining room table, which The Redhead(tm) and I never use for actual eating--we eat in the dinette or the living room. Thus, things on the table include but are not limited to:
my brother-in-law's punk-ish CD "Lather, Rinse, Repent" (not bad, if too preachy),
a LEAP Motion controller (neat technology, but I'd hold off on getting one just yet),
a pile of mail (including a school board packet I haven't read yet),
a big fluffy cat named Gunther (she likes to sleep against my laptop),
a stack of index cards with story ideas scrawled on them (awaiting entry into my "story ideas" folder in my computer).

The Horror Librarian:  What question did you wish I'd ask and what's your answer?

Patrick Freivald: What's my least favorite part of writing?

I'm glad you asked! My least favorite part of writing is titles. I hate titles so, so much. Titles are the bane of my existence. I agonize for weeks and months over those few little words, and usually change my mind a gazillion times.

The Horror Librarian: Thanks, Patrick!

Patrick Freivald: Thanks for having me. 

Tuesday, October 15, 2013

Patrick Freivald Bio

This week's special guest is...Patrick Freivald!  

Patrick's a fun guy that I had the opportunity to meet and hang with at BEA in New York City this past May.  We discussed books and writing and beekeeping (see below) and of course, zombies.  He also featured one of my short stories on his awesome blog:

I'm a busy guy. My "day job" is high school teacher--physics, robotics, and American Sign Language--in a tiny Western New York town. As part of that I put in 600+ hours a year running a FIRST Robotics team (, and I teach night classes at a community college. I'm on three committees at work (and chair one of them), sit on my local School Board, and am Vice President of the Ontario Finger Lakes Beekeeping Association ( I'm a self-employed beekeeper and, what brings me here, I'm also a novelist. I'm an outspoken, opinionated, unapologetic geek, fascinated by nature and people in equal measure.

I live in the middle of gorgeous nowhere and I love it here. You've heard of a one-stoplight town? We don't have one of those. What we do have is tens of thousands of acres of state forest, including two of the most beautiful lakes in the country, and great Buffalo wings.

The Redhead(tm) and I grow most of our own food (much of which she cans), I make my own wine (some of it drinkable), try to read at least one book a week (though lately it's more like one a month), and still manage to squeeze in the occasional game of Warhammer 40K with my friends. At home we have two dogs, a parrot, a cockatiel, six cats, and several million stinging insects. We're thinking about adding chickens. Maybe some sheep.

The question that this information usually provokes is, how? And more importantly, why? Why not just relax a bit?

Well, I'm a lazy, ADD-riddled workaholic. I guess what it comes down to is that I don't like being bored. I don't watch much TV, though when I do I tend to chew through entire seasons in a weekend--Game of Thrones, Breaking Bad, Dexter.... I wake up in the morning between six and seven, go to bed around midnight, and don't take many breaks in-between. I don't like being idle, I don't like just doing nothing, and (in the interest of complete honesty) I sometimes half-ass things like yard work, tend to neglect my friends, and don't have kids. (The Redhead(tm) gets neglected too, but that's the secret of our happy marriage--we try not to spend too much time together!)

I like Stephen King more than Dean Koontz--though Koontz's writing is tighter and cleaner--because King's fiction is messy in all the right ways. Koontz is fun to read, but [spoiler alert!] the good guys always win, even if they're quite worse off for the victory. George R. R. Martin beats out Robert Jordan, because Jordan's fight scenes are perfunctory--you know that nobody important is going to die, and no amount of well-written battle scenes will make a foregone conclusion as exciting as an unknown one. There's no script immunity in King and Martin (and Straub and Barker and so many others), and it brings real, visceral tension to their work. I've been known to sit through books and movies I don't particularly enjoy if I don't know how it's going to end up, and I'm usually glad I did.

I don't consider myself a Young Adult author, or a zombie author, or even a horror or thriller author. I write what I feel like writing, and I don't much care what genre other people decide it is. That said, I've always enjoyed things that are a little off-center. Fantasy and Science Fiction are great, and I do love them, but they don't have that certain something special you get from horror. Horror is a slight left-turn from everyday life. Horror is that feeling that we're all just one closet door away from the cenobites. Horror is that creeping, late-night sensation that everything might not be what it seems...and you don't want to know the truth.

Be sure to check back Thursday for the full interview.  And in the meantime, visit his GoodReads page or follow him on Twitter